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Website CopyB2B SaaS / Data Analytics

SaaS Website Copy Refresh

A full website copy overhaul for a Series B data analytics platform — from hero to footer — that resulted in a 41% lift in free trial sign-ups within 60 days of launch.

Client: Pulse Analytics

SaaS Website Copy Refresh

+41%

Free Trial Sign-Ups

Increase within 60 days of launch

45%

Pricing Page CVR

Conversion to trial (from 32%)

+28%

Demo Requests

Month-over-month increase

−2 weeks

Sales Cycle

Average reduction in sales cycle length

01
The Challenge

Pulse Analytics had strong product-market fit and growing inbound traffic, but their conversion rate told a different story. Visitors were landing on the homepage, reading the features section, and leaving. The copy was technically accurate but strategically inert — it described what the product did without helping anyone understand why it mattered or who it was for.

The team had also recently expanded their ICP from individual analysts to director-level buyers at mid-market companies. The existing copy still spoke to the original user persona. The positioning needed to shift, and so did the language.

02
The Approach

We began with a three-week discovery phase: reviewing existing customer interviews, analyzing exit surveys, and conducting positioning workshops with the founding team and key customer-facing staff.

From that research, we identified the core tension Pulse solved: data teams were spending more time wrangling reports than acting on insights. That tension became the backbone of the new homepage headline.

We rewrote every page on the site — home, features, pricing, about, and five use-case landing pages — using a consistent messaging architecture built around three themes: speed to insight, confidence in data, and team-wide visibility. Each page was written to serve a specific stage of the buying journey, with proof elements calibrated to the level of commitment each page was asking for.

03
The Results

Within 60 days of launch, free trial sign-ups increased by 41%. The pricing page, which had previously seen 68% drop-off, improved to 45% conversion to trial. Demo request volume increased by 28%.

The team reported that sales cycles shortened by approximately two weeks, attributed largely to prospects arriving on calls with a clearer understanding of the product and its differentiation. Within six months, organic conversion from content had improved enough that the team was able to reduce their paid acquisition spend by 22% while maintaining lead volume.

SCRIPTED. didn't just write copy for us — they helped us understand what we were actually selling. The new positioning changed how our whole team talks about the product, not just the website.

Rachel Torres

VP of Marketing · Pulse Analytics

Project Details

Client
Pulse Analytics
Industry
B2B SaaS / Data Analytics
Service
Website Copy

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